This
recipe will make one simple short story and is useful when
you have to write a story at short notice and within a time
limit.
i) In your opening paragraph describe the weather, the place
and your main character.
ii) Now, start the next paragraph with speech. Your character
wants to do something – what is it? Introduce your
other character and describe their looks and personality. TIP: Don’t
tell your reader everything; show them some of it.
E.g. Instead of writing…"he had brown hair"… write… "he
pushed his brown hair away from his eyes." This helps
the reader to imagine your character.
iii) Open this paragraph with another
detail of description about the place or a change in the
weather. Something is going to go wrong and your character
has a problem – describe
it.
iv) Start this paragraph with an adverb – Suddenly,
Cautiously, Hurriedly, Slowly etc. Shut your eyes and imagine
what you might hear, see smell etc. Make it tense!
v) Solve the problem, refer back to the weather and/or a
detail of the description and the place from the beginning
of your story. Describe an aspect of your main character
that has now changed.
2.A
Story Recipe(version
2: outline + example)
This recipe will make one
simple short story and is useful when you have to write a story at
short notice and within a time limit – you have to do this at
school sometimes.
i) In your opening paragraph describe the weather, the place and your main
character:
It had been a long hot day but now a dark cloud
covered the sun and Bill shivered. Behind him the empty beach stretched
back to a distant sea. A few feet away, the top of her head just showing
above the hole they had dug together, Bill’s sister Gina chattered
to herself as she continued to dig. Everyone else had packed up and
gone home. They were alone…
ii) Now, start the next paragraph with speech. Your
character wants to do something – what
is it? Introduce your other character and describe them. Include a simile in
your description:
“Mum! Where are you?” Bill’s
shout disappeared on the wind. The beach was stark and gloomy and the
clouds were like purple bruises on the grey sky. Gina climbed hurriedly
out of the hole.
“Where is everyone? Where’s Mum gone?”
Her eyes were wide as she glanced anxiously up and down the beach. Gina’s
hair was the colour of straw and the salt air and sand had stiffened it so
that it stood in spikes around her thin face…
iii) Open this paragraph with another detail of description
about the place or a change in the weather. Something is going wrong and your
character has a problem – describe it:
It began to rain. Huge raindrops
splashed against Bill’s
skin and left dark craters in the soft sand.
“Mum must have gone back to the hotel, come on let’s go.” Bill
turned away and started to walk towards the sand dunes. The wind flung stinging
sand at his shins and he lowered his face against the rain.
“Wait! Billy don’t go!” Gina shouted, “I’m coming
with you.” She started to run and screamed as a loud crash of thunder boomed
overhead…
iv) Start this paragraph with an adverb – e.g.
Suddenly, Cautiously, Hurriedly, Slowly etc. Shut your eyes and imagine what
your characters might hear, see, smell, etc. Make it exciting:
Reluctantly, Bill turned to wait for his sister. As he
reached for her hand an explosion of forked lightning ripped through the blackening
sky. He grabbed Gina by the wrist and they ran…
v) Solve the problem, refer back to the weather
and/or a detail of the place as described in your opening paragraph:
Just half an hour before it had been sunny and calm and
several happy families had been playing on the sand. Now a storm was raging
around them and everyone else had gone. Bill glanced up at the steep sand dune
that stood between them and the hotel and he started to climb, pulling Gina
with him.
It’s up to you to decide how this story ends…or maybe it’s
the opening chapter of something bigger.
3. Use
An Object To Inspire A Story
You can use any interesting or unusual object
to get your imagination going:
A woodman came to chop down a tree but just as
he went to swing his axe a goblin jumped out from the roots and
told him to stop.
The woodman laughed and carried on cutting down
the tree so the goblin turned him into a wooden rabbit.
The next day two children were walking in the
woods and they found the little wooden rabbit. They took it home
to use as an eggcup.
One of the children cried and when the tears
fell on the little wooden rabbit it came to life...
What could happen next? Ask yourself, "What
if this happened? What if that happened?"
Have
a go at telling the wooden rabbit's story, either to someone else or
to yourself inside your head - just before going to sleep is a good
time to do this. Use the ideas above or just daydream and come up with
your own.
Thanks to Year 3 pupils at Yerbury Primary School for
the ideas shown above.
Have a go at writing a list poem. They are good
fun and very satisfying. Don’t worry about making rhymes but
do think about the words you choose – they need to sound pleasant
to you and to put pictures in your mind.
First of all, make a list of five
things that would cheer you up if you were having a bad day.
Here’s mine:
Five Things To Cheer Me Up: Pale yellow butter
melting on toast.
A brown dog dozing by my feet.
Birds singing in the trees about my head.
A good book in my lap.
Peace and quiet in the sunshine.
Now think about someone else and
think of five things that would cheer them up. How about a
rabbit, (a row of carrots in an empty garden…) or the Queen,
(a caravan holiday by the sea perhaps) or anyone or anything that pops
into your head.
You can even write this kind of poem about inanimate
objects.
For example:
Five Things To Cheer Up A
Chair: Being placed on
a beautiful silk carpet.
A ten-minute leg polish with bees wax.
A sign that reads ‘No person over 50kg to sit on this chair’.
Getting re-upholstered in a fabric of its choice.
Being placed near a window with a view of the sea.
...Have fun!
5.Holiday
Escapades
Tom and Keira were bored. It was the last day
of the holidays and it was pouring with rain. Just before Mum went to
work the phone rang. Mum answered it.
"Oh dear," she said. "Well, I hope
you feel better soon."
Mum looked at the children and then at her watch.
"The babysitter can't come and I'm going to have to go or I'll be late for
work. Don't get into any mischief. I'll ask Mrs. Popper to call in on you at
lunchtime."
Mum had been gone less than five minutes when
the trouble started...
6.The
World In The Hole
The strangest thing happened to me the other
day. I was lying on the floor reading a book when I noticed a tiny hole
in the skirting board. I crawled closer for a better look and as I peered
into the hole I saw two sharp little eyes staring back at me. It was
dark inside the hole so I put my face even closer.
Suddenly the hole started to get bigger - or I
started to get smaller - because the next thing I knew I was the same
size as the hole and then it was bigger than me and then before I knew
it I was standing eye to eye with a twitchy, whiskery mouse.
"And about time too!" said the mouse. "I've
been calling you for hours. Now hurry up and follow me!" ...
7.The
Story Of Fudge
"No, you can't have a puppy and that's that!" said
Dave's mum.
He knew it was useless to plead; his mum would just get cross. But what was
he going to do now? Upstairs in his bedroom, hidden beneath his bed was a soft
fat puppy called Fudge. And Dave had no intention of parting with Fudge. Not
ever. Somehow he was going to have to convince mum that Fudge was a good idea.
But first he needed to get some of his dinner off his plate and into his pockets
because Fudge would be hungry...
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